blackberries
she is a wall at the forest’s edge
an impenetrable bramble, untamed
some say she’s invasive, an unruly hedge
in fact she’s a rose of another sweet name
an impenetrable bramble, untamed
greening each spring, flowering to buds
in fact she’s a rose of another sweet name
with drupelets sweet and ready to pluck
greening each spring, flowering to buds
one must take care when venturing too close
with drupelets sweet and ready to pluck
her prickly cane stem’s a formidable foe
one must take care when venturing too close
when fair rubis ursinus nips, she draws blood
her prickly cane stem’s a formidable foe
a favorite snack of deer folk and thrush
when fair rubis ursinus nips, she draws blood
she is a wall at the forest’s edge
a favorite snack of deer folk and thrush
some say she’s invasive, an unruly hedge
~kat
NaPoWriMo2023 Challenge Day 17: Write a poem that contains the name of a specific variety of edible plant – preferably one that grows in your area. In the poem, try to make a specific comparison between some aspect of the plant’s lifespan and your own – or the life of someone close to you. Also, include at least one repeating phrase.
I chose to do a Pantoum ( see the rules below):
Stanza 1: ABAB
1 First line (A)
2 Second line (B)
3 Third line rhymes with first (A)
4 Fourth line rhymes with second (B)
Stanza 2: BCBC
5 Repeat the second line (B)
6 Sixth line (C)
7 Repeat the fourth line (B)
8 Eighth line rhymes with sixth (C)
Stanza 3: CDCD
9 Repeat the sixth line (C)
10 Tenth line (D)
11 Repeat the eighth line (C)
12 Twelfth line rhymes with the tenth (D)
Stanza 4: DADA
13 Repeat tenth line (D)
14 Fourteenth line rhymes with first (A)
15 Repeat twelfth line (D)
16 Repeat the first line (A)
like mercury colliding... 