these duplicitous times
pay close attention to the marginalia
we all must learn to read between the lines
disseminating truth right now is mania
in this, the most duplicitous of times
we all must learn to read between the lines
sift through every boastful sciolism
in this, the most duplicitous of times
to thwart attempts at history’s revision
sift through every boastful sciolism
find the facts, elusive, they may be,
to thwart attempts at history’s revision
don’t believe in everything you see
find the facts, elusive, they may be,
check out all the blather that you hear
don’t believe in everything you see
until trust is restored, we’re lost, I fear
check out all the blather that you hear
disseminating truth right now is mania
until trust is restored, we’re lost, I fear
pay close attention to the marginalia
~kat
A Pantoum for today’s NaPoWriMo/GloPoWriMo 2020 Challenge. (See below for today’s challenge and information about the pantoum poetry form). I chose my words from the last 10 days of dictionary.com’s Word of the Day feature, because hey, I love learning new words! Then I gleaned five rhyming words for each from Rhymezone. I managed to use a half dozen or so words from the resulting “word bank”. Phew! Today’s challenge was a workout!!!
NaPoWriMo/GloPoWriMo 2020 Challenge Day 3 – make use of our resource (online rhyming dictionary) for the day. First, make a list of ten words. You can generate this list however you’d like – pull a book off the shelf and find ten words you like, name ten things you can see from where you’re sitting, etc. Now, for each word, use Rhymezone to identify two to four similar-sounding or rhyming words. For example, if my word is “salt,” my similar words might be “belt,” “silt,” “sailed,” and “sell-out.”
Once you’ve assembled your complete list, work on writing a poem using your new “word bank.” You don’t have to use every word, of course, but try to play as much with sound as possible, repeating sounds and echoing back to others using your rhyming and similar words.
The pantoum consists of a series of quatrains rhyming ABAB, BCBC, CDCD, ZAZA. The design is simple:
Line 1
Line 2
Line 3
Line 4
Line 5 (repeat of line 2)
Line 6
Line 7 (repeat of line 4)
Line 8
Last stanza:
Line 2 of previous stanza
Line 3 of first stanza
Line 4 of previous stanza
Line 1 of first stanza
April 3rd, 2020 at 3:27 pm
This is awesome! Thanks for sharing your process and reminding me how effective a pantoum’s repetition can be.You rose to the prompt. I do worry that we’re lost. Sorry bunch, humanity, I’m grateful for good people.
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April 3rd, 2020 at 4:59 pm
Thank you. It is absolutely true that we have lost our way, long before this pandemic I think. But I hope we’ll find our way back as we realize how connected we are. I love pantoums and every form that has repetition or a refrain. It can be very powerful.
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April 3rd, 2020 at 3:37 pm
It is surprising that how few people really try to find facts for themselves.
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April 3rd, 2020 at 4:59 pm
I know, right?
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April 3rd, 2020 at 5:05 pm
Yes, unfortunately.
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April 3rd, 2020 at 5:23 pm
Kat, verily she has returned.
She has returned, allelujah!
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April 3rd, 2020 at 5:24 pm
Haha! You made me smile Peter. It feels good to be back. 😊
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April 3rd, 2020 at 5:30 pm
It was a workout!! I only got 11 lines from a day’s efforts. This is herculean…or amazonian depending on your view point.
We need to trust those closest first, then work our way tentatively from there, I sense.
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April 3rd, 2020 at 5:37 pm
That sounds like a good place to start. We are certainly spending quality time with those closest! I agree. Today’s challenge took a bit of sweat.
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April 3rd, 2020 at 6:59 pm
Sage advice and well-crafted. I forgot how much I love reading this form.
I haven’t tried one of these in a while. I may have to dust off the rust!
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April 3rd, 2020 at 7:13 pm
Thanks Barry. You should! I love forms that have repeat verses.
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