
It’s been a fortnight since I did a ReVerse poem. In that time I explored the Elfchen and the Than-Bauk, with a detour into a magnificent spring day! A happy digression. 😊 I must say, I love this ReVerse poem. All those short little micropoetry lines add up nicely. I imagine it is because the brevity of short form forces one to be succinct. At any rate it is a good look back!
I hope this day finds you well and happy. It’s been an overcast damp few days here on Bramlett Mountain, but I can’t complain. Everything is magnificent! Green and lush. How many springs have I rushed through on my way to summer? I am just glad that I am finally noticing the gift of spring. It would have been such a shame to exit this life having missed it! Peace, love, and spring bliss to you! 💚🌷💚
A ReVerse Poem - 14 May 2023
gather ‘round the bonfire
solving the world’s problems
work to live
treasured gifts
idle chitchat
sunlight tendrils streaming through
day fading into night
me, watching you
don’t say, “love you”
you make me wait
how green the earth
my cue to breathe
assuring us all is well, all is well
‘til the page turned
fine lines were real
they were deceived
charming untruths
joy and tears…
mind your business
I could go on
takes a pure heart
funny thing, bliss
~kat
A ReVerse poem (a practice I started many years ago) is a summary poem with a single line lifted from each entry of a collection of work over a particular timeframe and re-penned in chronological order as a new poem. Unlike a collaborative poem, the ReVerse features the words of one writer, providing a glimpse into their thoughts over time.
May 14th, 2023 at 8:18 am
Beautifully put together Kat.
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May 14th, 2023 at 10:07 am
thanks Sadje. I really like how this one came together. 😊
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May 14th, 2023 at 11:37 am
You’re welcome
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May 14th, 2023 at 10:13 am
Fascinating form, love this ReVerse and “Tea for One”
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May 14th, 2023 at 11:46 am
Thank you…I came up with this years ago as a way to summarize a collection of my poetry at the time, lifting my favorite line from each and was so excited by what that new poem became…I’ve been doing it ever since in smaller bursts. That first ReVerse of mine was epic! 😊
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May 16th, 2023 at 8:00 pm
Oh that is awesome. I should try that favorite line from each of a few poems …. hmmmm got me thinking
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May 16th, 2023 at 9:45 pm
Enjoy! It’s surprising how they often fit together perfectly!
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