13-
funny thing, bliss
it exists but
we miss, trying
14-
takes a pure heart
to impart the
true art of love
~kat
And that’s a wrap! A week exploring the Than-Bauk. It’s a fun little form with just enough of a challenge to make it interesting. On Monday I’ll be taking on the Landay, another micropoetry form consisting of 22 syllables and only two lines. More to come on that. Before I sign off, one more look at the bones of the Than-Bauk in case you want to give it a go!
Than-bauk Poems – This Burmese poetic form is pithy and often clever, comprising just three four-syllable lines. The last syllable of the first line rhymes with the third syllable of the second line, as well as the second syllable of the third line.
May 14th, 2023 at 7:53 am
Love both these poems Kat. Thank you for introducing me to different poetic forms
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May 14th, 2023 at 8:14 am
Hi Sadje! It has been my pleasure! Most of all it has kept me on track writing something each day, exploring these short forms. Looking forward to what this coming week brings! I hope you are doing well. 😊
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May 14th, 2023 at 8:16 am
Thanks Kat, I’m good. I was chosen as poet for the week for a poetry challenge and I asked everyone to write Elfchen for this week. We had a tremendous response. Everyone loved this.
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May 14th, 2023 at 8:18 am
That is wonderful! Congratulations! I will definitely check it out! Thank you for sharing. 😊
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May 14th, 2023 at 8:19 am
Thank you for introducing me to this form. 💖
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May 14th, 2023 at 8:17 am
Here’s the link to that challenge
http://skepticskaddish.com/2023/05/10/w3-prompt-54-weave-written-weekly/
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