Today I am exploring the Reverse Poem. A Reverse Poem is a freeform verse. The masters of this form write lines and lines…I feel lucky to have pulled out 14! Here’s the definition: Reverse poetry is a poem that can be read forwards one way and have a meaning, but also be read backwards and have another different meaning. A type of ‘reverse‘ writing is called a palindrome. Palindrome comes from the Greek words “palin” (again or back) and “dramein” (to run).
As you can imagine it’s a bit tricky. I have seen other variations of this type of poem, the Palindrome (which is a mirror image poem with a break in between) and a form that some of you have tried this week from a NaPoWriMo Poetry challenge that prompted you to write a poem backwards (which also should be read from the bottom up). The Reverse Poem should be read top to bottom and then bottom to top and should have two different meanings. At any rate, here’s my try…I know this is another form that will take a bit of practice to master.
Falling In and Out and In Love
I think
I love you
like the very first time
I heard your voice
my heart fluttered and
I caught you watching me
as you looked away, blushing
something changed
I’m not sure when it was, but
you don’t look at me
you hardly speak anymore and
I should tell you
I don’t think
I love youkat ~28 April 2016





April 28th, 2016 at 7:52 pm
Sad the ending. The connection at first, no longer a connection. Love has left. Well wrote.
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April 28th, 2016 at 9:03 pm
Thanks Mandi. I think it needs tweaking…but then I’d likely ruin it!
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April 28th, 2016 at 9:38 pm
It’s perfect!
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April 28th, 2016 at 10:18 pm
Thanks!☺️
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April 28th, 2016 at 9:43 pm
This is perfect if you read the true reverse form! She falls in love, then out, then back in love. I love it, lol! It is a happy ending, not sad!
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April 28th, 2016 at 10:18 pm
Thanks Kathryn! It was a bit tricky to pull off!
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April 29th, 2016 at 3:21 am
Excellent and a comom happening. You have caught the feelings well.xxx
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April 29th, 2016 at 5:29 am
It’s that relationship status called, “it’s complicated!” Thanks Willowdot! 😊
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April 29th, 2016 at 8:50 am
Reblogged this on BigandPinkyToes and commented:
Whew! I cannot believe it is the end of April already. I’ve been following Like Mercury Colliding. For the entire month of April she has participated in a poetry challenge, writing and posting a poem a day. Wow, I know I couldn’t do it and think that’s an awesome accomplishment!
Also, congratulations for everyone who participated in the A-Z challenge this month. I did not. However, I have enjoyed reading your posts and think it is an accomplishment as well.
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April 30th, 2016 at 5:53 am
Amazing to me! I don’t know how you even think forward and backward and make it work. Stories told in circles do something similar, but not as challenging in my opinion. Wow, this was great.
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April 30th, 2016 at 11:10 am
Haha! It definitely kills a few brain cells to pull it off Linda! Thanks for commenting. I really do appreciate when people take the time to chat! Have a great weekend! 😊
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