
issues….
We are not free, to feel what we feel
to say it out loud, to say what we think, to be real.
I’m afraid if I tell you the truth
you’ll reject me as other…it won’t matter, the proof.
When did voting become a dagger,
a weapon of hate wielded by carpetbaggers?
It’s not that our politics don’t jive
But it’s the pleasure you take harming innocent lives.
Landay – The Landay is the poetic form of Afghan women. The poem is 22 syllables long and contains 2 lines. 9 syllables in the first and 11 in the second. Rhyme is not specifically called for but a great many do rhyme at the end of each line. Subjects can include, but are not limited to, war, separation, homeland, grief, or love.
Pronunciation/Etymology. In Pashto, “landay (LAND-ee)” means “short, poisonous snake,” likely an allusion to its minimal length and use of sarcasm. Landays (or landai) often criticize traditions and gender roles.
May 20th, 2023 at 8:18 am
Thought provoking set of poems.
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May 20th, 2023 at 8:30 am
There are so many things to think about these days!
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May 20th, 2023 at 8:39 am
Oh yes way too many
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May 20th, 2023 at 9:05 am
😟
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May 20th, 2023 at 8:23 am
Well done with the form. When did voting become daggers? Poignant
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May 20th, 2023 at 8:30 am
Thank you VJ. I am enjoying this form very much!
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May 20th, 2023 at 8:34 am
Welcome
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May 20th, 2023 at 11:26 am
All so totally relevant 💜
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May 20th, 2023 at 3:09 pm
Crazy times! There is certainly plenty to write about! 😳
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May 20th, 2023 at 12:09 pm
[…] I learned of this form of poetry from Kat Myrman at Like Mercury Colliding. […]
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May 20th, 2023 at 3:24 pm
There certainly is 💜
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