the wind whispers through an open window
fluttering through the veil
beckoning from beyond
~kat
Kimo poems are an Israeli version of haikqApparently, there was a need for more syllables in Hebrew. That said, most of the rules are still familiar:
• 3 lines.
• No rhymes.
• 10 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second, and 6 in the third.
Also, the kimo is focused on a single frozen image (kind of like a snapshot). So it’s uncommon to have any movement happening in kimo poems.
July 27th, 2019 at 10:49 pm
Vivid and beautiful
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July 27th, 2019 at 10:53 pm
Thank you Sadje! 😊
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July 27th, 2019 at 10:56 pm
A pleasure Kat.
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July 27th, 2019 at 10:51 pm
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July 30th, 2019 at 10:44 pm
Thanks for the poem:)
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July 30th, 2019 at 11:19 pm
My pleasure. 😊
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