’twas an interlude from ordinary
serendipity, love’s bliss
no words, mem’ries to keep
~kat
Kimo poems are an Israeli version of haikqApparently, there was a need for more syllables in Hebrew. That said, most of the rules are still familiar:
• 3 lines.
• No rhymes.
• 10 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second, and 6 in the third.
Also, the kimo is focused on a single frozen image (kind of like a snapshot). So it’s uncommon to have any movement happening in kimo poems.
July 26th, 2019 at 10:56 am
Lovely! Thanks for the intro to Kimo too
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July 26th, 2019 at 11:24 am
Thank you! My pleasure. The Kimo is a nice variation on the Haiku. 😊
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July 26th, 2019 at 1:10 pm
Lovely poem!
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July 27th, 2019 at 9:20 pm
Thank you Sadje! 😊
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July 27th, 2019 at 10:11 pm
You’re welcome !
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July 26th, 2019 at 2:35 pm
You like this form. It shows!
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July 26th, 2019 at 3:20 pm
Thank you Peter. Some days are better than others! 😉
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