…just another summer day
simmering humidity, hot, thin air,
clouds hang in the breezeless sky,
low, gray, hoarding raindrops
~kat
Kimo poems are an Israeli version of haikqApparently, there was a need for more syllables in Hebrew. That said, most of the rules are still familiar:
• 3 lines.
• No rhymes.
• 10 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second, and 6 in the third.
Also, the kimo is focused on a single frozen image (kind of like a snapshot). So it’s uncommon to have any movement happening in kimo poems.
July 14th, 2019 at 12:07 pm
Rain will be welcome!
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July 14th, 2019 at 12:41 pm
A good rain will! A few drops will just add to the steamy air!!! 😀
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July 14th, 2019 at 12:10 pm
Awesome
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July 14th, 2019 at 1:07 pm
Thank you! 😊
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July 15th, 2019 at 7:53 pm
You’re welcome
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July 14th, 2019 at 12:45 pm
Lovely Kat.
I took this photo this morning, and put a Kimo to it.
How did I do?
https://pensitivity101.wordpress.com/2019/07/14/first-go-at-a-kimo-poem/
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July 14th, 2019 at 12:47 pm
You nailed it I think. It’s a nice change from the Haiku. 😊
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July 14th, 2019 at 12:47 pm
It is. I like variety.
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July 14th, 2019 at 1:07 pm
Me too.
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July 14th, 2019 at 1:19 pm
Oh wow. Glad I found your blog kat, through Di. I love trying different forms of poetry 😊
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July 14th, 2019 at 1:47 pm
Welcome! I try a new short form each month. It helps to keep me writing each day! 😊
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July 14th, 2019 at 1:52 pm
I know just what you mean kat. I am a bit like that too. When I found the etheree I couldn’t stop writing them lol. Looks like it might be the same with the Kimo 😀. It is strange how new forms can release you from a rut!
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July 14th, 2019 at 1:54 pm
Sometimes the short forms can be a real challenge too. I love the Etheree. There are so many wonderful forms to explore! 😊
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July 14th, 2019 at 1:56 pm
I know. It’s amazing isn’t it. 😊
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July 14th, 2019 at 1:30 pm
[…] Kimo – Day 14 […]
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July 14th, 2019 at 1:34 pm
Just had a go. Here’s mine! I really like the form. Nice change
https://blindwilderness.wordpress.com/2019/07/14/sitting-by-the-bridge-2/
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