but for grace…
the reaper swung his sickle this past week
souls I never met succumbed
somewhere, someone’s grieving
~kat
Kimo Poems
Kimo poems are an Israeli version of haikqApparently, there was a need for more syllables in Hebrew. That said, most of the rules are still familiar:
• 3 lines.
• No rhymes.
• 10 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second, and 6 in the third.
Also, the kimo is focused on a single frozen image (kind of like a snapshot). So it’s uncommon to have any movement happening in kimo poems.
July 7th, 2019 at 3:20 pm
may they rest in peace, may those who grieve find peace ….may the weather be peaceful xxxx
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July 7th, 2019 at 4:00 pm
Yes. Several people I know have lost friends and loved ones recently.
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July 7th, 2019 at 4:14 pm
so sad, life can be cruel xxxxx
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July 7th, 2019 at 8:00 pm
Yes…so sad. 😦
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July 8th, 2019 at 1:52 am
❤
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