the coming storm
an eerie shroud of silence chokes the air,
cool and wet this steamy night,
low clouds strobe gray on blue
~kat
Kimo Poems
Kimo poems are an Israeli version of haikqApparently, there was a need for more syllables in Hebrew. That said, most of the rules are still familiar:
• 3 lines.
• No rhymes.
• 10 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second, and 6 in the third.
Also, the kimo is focused on a single frozen image (kind of like a snapshot). So it’s uncommon to have any movement happening in kimo poems.
July 5th, 2019 at 11:26 pm
How vivid is the picture.
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