
Photo Courtesy of Maria Estela Avalos
Sevenling (a good father)
a good father
loves his children
nurtures them, protects them from harm
a good father
is willing to die for them
to scale mountains, and sometimes rivers
woe to the nation who shutters their gates to goodness
(Dedicated to the good father we failed this week…Oscar Alberto Martínez Ramírez and his nearly 2-year-old daughter, Valeria.)
~kat
The elements of the Sevenling are:
1. a heptastich, a poem in 7 lines made up of 2 tercets followed by a single line.
2. metered at the discretion of the poet.
3. unrhymed.
4. composed with 3 complimentary images in the first tercet and 3 parallel images in the second tercet. The end line is a juxtaposed summary of the 2 parallels, a sort of “punchline”.
5. the poem should be titled “Sevenling: (first few words of poem).
June 26th, 2019 at 10:56 pm
A sad incident.
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June 27th, 2019 at 1:40 am
A senseless tragedy
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June 27th, 2019 at 9:35 am
It really was. And it was completely avoidable. So sad.
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June 27th, 2019 at 6:12 pm
My heart bleeds for these two innocents. I my heart also bleeds for a nation that has so lost sight of what is right and what is good.
What ever happened to.
“Give me your tired, your poor, Your huddled masses yearning to breathe free, The wretched refuse of your teeming shore. Send these, the homeless, tempest-tossed to me, I lift my lamp beside the golden door!”The Statue of Liberty-Ellis Island Foundation, Inc.??
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June 28th, 2019 at 12:08 am
I know Willow. It breaks my heart. ☹️😢
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June 28th, 2019 at 2:06 am
You got that across beautifully 💜💜
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June 28th, 2019 at 9:25 pm
Thank you. This breaks my heart, too.
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July 1st, 2019 at 9:25 pm
We need to fix this…:(
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July 2nd, 2019 at 12:06 am
Yes, as many of us as can.
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June 29th, 2019 at 4:53 pm
🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀
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