Sevenling (whirlwinds)
whirlwinds
catch us unaware
displacing things, turning us around
the hours tick tock
another day lost to
urgency, futile pursuits, unfinished to do lists
the sweet scent of roses goes unnoticed
~kat
The elements of the Sevenling are:
1. a heptastich, a poem in 7 lines made up of 2 tercets followed by a single line.
2. metered at the discretion of the poet.
3. unrhymed.
4. composed with 3 complimentary images in the first tercet and 3 parallel images in the second tercet. The end line is a juxtaposed summary of the 2 parallels, a sort of “punchline”.
5. the poem should be titled “Sevenling: (first few words of poem).
June 26th, 2019 at 12:39 am
Wonderful.
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June 26th, 2019 at 3:23 pm
Thank you Lanning. 🙂
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June 26th, 2019 at 5:53 am
So true 💜
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June 26th, 2019 at 3:22 pm
Yes…I need to force myself to stop and smell the roses. ❤️💜❤️
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June 26th, 2019 at 4:34 pm
Yes indeed 💜
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June 26th, 2019 at 6:29 pm
😊🌹😊
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June 26th, 2019 at 5:58 am
Niceee
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June 26th, 2019 at 6:15 pm
Thank you Sneha! 🙂
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June 26th, 2019 at 12:29 pm
The last line – never!!!!
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June 26th, 2019 at 3:22 pm
Lucky you! I am way too busy some days!
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June 26th, 2019 at 3:29 pm
Retirement has some benefits!
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June 26th, 2019 at 6:29 pm
Yes, so I hear! I hope you have a cool place to hang out during the heat wave!!! 😳
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June 26th, 2019 at 6:54 pm
I think we are going to miss the worst. Crazy weather! Global warming – false news!!
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June 26th, 2019 at 7:17 pm
That’s good news! It certainly is crazy weather!
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