at dusk
amber streams
bleed into blue; the sun creeps
down, down, behind the lace arbor
scrim sundered, dreams in wait
~kat
Day Two – September Poems featuring the Pensee.*
*The Pensee – A syllabic form. No meter specified. No rhyme. Syllabic count 2-4-7-8-6:
line 1 is the subject;
line 2 gives description;
line 3, action;
line 4, the setting;
line 5, final thought.
like mercury colliding... 
September 2nd, 2018 at 1:47 pm
I really like your Pensee poems – never come across that form before. Have tried one out & feel hooked ! Thank you.
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September 2nd, 2018 at 1:53 pm
Me too. I was looking for short form poetry forms and discovered it. I really like it. 😊
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September 2nd, 2018 at 2:01 pm
A very discriptive dusk, beautiful . 🌹
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September 2nd, 2018 at 5:53 pm
Thank you Willow. I am loving this new poetry form. The varied syllables and set progression give one many options.
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September 2nd, 2018 at 5:56 pm
It works well, sounds nice and looks good 💜
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September 2nd, 2018 at 5:38 pm
Ah, such Grooviness. 😎🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀
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