A Proper Florescence #1 – Take 2

amidst the fescue seas
a pair of blooming trees
hint of spice on the breeze, birds in tryst


I absolutely mangled my first go at this new form by Jane Dougherty, the Florescence, by completely overlooking the final rhyme. As promised, my do-over. A little more “spicy” than the first, which I like very much! Amazing what comes of following the rules! πŸ˜‰

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