She was the kind of girl who lit up a room. Not in a flashy over the top sort of way. She had a calming presence, but it was more than that. Grace perhaps? It was something special, hard to describe. I remember the first time I saw her sitting along the far edge of a room full of boisterous people, heavy into schmoozing. She was deep in conversation with our host’s Labrador Retriever. Otis was his name I think. And Otis, well, he hung on her every word, just as I drank in her every move, breathless.
I underestimated her that first meeting, you know. Of course I made it a point to get to know her better. Wouldn’t you? She opened herself to me like an ocean, given to tidal swells of emotion, teeming with life just under the surface, fierce yet healing. I hadn’t expected to find a wild spirit beneath her calm demeanor, but it endeared her to me even more. Over the years I learned about wild things. Only one so confident, comfortable in their own skin can exude such grace. Only one so free could dance through the layers of suffering and cross over into death…and in so doing, teach us all…teach me, what it is to live.
light fading, flicker
death swept you away too soon
how graceful you were
dancing with death, like lovers,
your final breath seizing mine
~kat
For Colleen Cheseboro’s Weekly Poetry Challenge inspired by the words: Calm and Wild. Today’s offering, a Haibun/Tanka. I have only recently discovered this form and I’m really enjoying idea of marrying poetry and prose. Peace and Grace Everyone! ❤
July 18th, 2017 at 1:36 pm
Good evening 🐞
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July 18th, 2017 at 6:37 pm
Hello lady bugs! 😊
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July 19th, 2017 at 1:42 am
Thanks Kat Myrman 🐞
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July 18th, 2017 at 1:53 pm
Wow! I was entranced by your words. Stunning haibun, Kat. ❤
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July 18th, 2017 at 2:19 pm
Thank you Olga. I am truly enjoying this poetry/prose form. ❤
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July 18th, 2017 at 3:34 pm
Wonderful! ❤
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July 18th, 2017 at 7:07 pm
❤️
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July 18th, 2017 at 1:56 pm
Kat, what a gorgeous Haibun. I read with tears in my eyes, drinking in the emotions that slipped from your words. Lovely. ❤
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July 18th, 2017 at 2:18 pm
Thank you Colleen. You are so sweet to take the time to comment. ❤
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July 18th, 2017 at 2:31 pm
I really enjoyed your prose. ❤
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July 18th, 2017 at 3:47 pm
Brava..🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀
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July 18th, 2017 at 11:01 pm
Beautiful rendition of grace! It creates new benchmarks, both for good poetry and grace.
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July 19th, 2017 at 6:18 am
Thank you so much! ❤️
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July 18th, 2017 at 11:41 pm
This was so moving, I felt it was a true experience of yours preceding the poetry. Wow, excellent combination!
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July 19th, 2017 at 6:55 am
Thank you Kathryn…(it wasn’t) ❤️ I am growing to love the Haibun.
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July 21st, 2017 at 7:27 am
Beautiful, Kat!
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July 21st, 2017 at 1:29 pm
Thank you Merril 🙂
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July 25th, 2017 at 2:05 am
[…] Her Eulogy | like mercury colliding… […]
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July 25th, 2017 at 11:33 pm
I really like this Kat. And congratulations on being featured.
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July 26th, 2017 at 4:06 am
Thank you! It was such a nice surprise. 😊
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