
How are we so different from them,
our women treated as chattel by power drunken men.
There are women I don’t understand,
who deny themselves, follow in lockstep with a man.
Burning burst of water, blood, and flesh
birthing is a beautiful, exhilarating mess.
~kat
Landay – The Landay is the poetic form of Afghan women. The poem is 22 syllables long and contains 2 lines. 9 syllables in the first and 11 in the second. Subjects can include, but are not limited to, war, separation, homeland, grief, or love.
Pronunciation/Etymology. In Pashto, “landay (LAND-ee)” means “short, poisonous snake,” likely an allusion to its minimal length and use of sarcasm. Landays (or landai) often criticize traditions and gender roles.
May 18th, 2023 at 9:59 am
All poems are so evocative Kat.
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May 18th, 2023 at 11:19 am
Thanks Sadje. This form lends well to emotional themes.
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May 18th, 2023 at 11:31 am
Specially when you’re writing it.
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May 18th, 2023 at 3:41 pm
Awe…thank you Sadje. I do try. 😊
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May 18th, 2023 at 7:01 pm
You’re most welcome
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May 18th, 2023 at 10:37 am
there are so many mistreated women in this poor world. This poem sums it up in the first line 🙂
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May 18th, 2023 at 11:18 am
I know…we are sisterhood sharing many sorrows.
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May 18th, 2023 at 3:57 pm
Absolutely beautiful 💜
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May 18th, 2023 at 3:58 pm
Thank you Willow! 💚
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May 18th, 2023 at 4:01 pm
A pleasure Kat 💜💜
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