bloom flower moon I hardly noticed day fading into night bright
~kat
I have enjoyed spending a week with the Elfchen. Come Monday looking forward to a new, new poetry form to practice…the Than-bauk! With three four syllable lines in total, easy-peasy right?! Ah, but there is a bit of a twist! Stay tuned! 😊
The Elfchen, known as an “elevenie” in English, the German elfchen (which loosely translates to “little eleven” or “wee eleven”) contains 11 words separated into five lines: one word, then two, then three, then four, then one again. The first line of an elfchen is traditionally some single-word concept, thought, or thing, which the rest of the poem describes—what it does, how it looks, how it makes you feel, whatever strikes your fancy. The last line is often a synonym or some other overarching reflection of your first word.
So it is easier for you to find all the parts/chapters of my ongoing fiction series, I created a new page that lists all the links. You can check it out HERE!
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Kat Myrman and Like Mercury Colliding with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
May 7th, 2023 at 7:28 am
I enjoyed your poems Kat
LikeLiked by 1 person
May 7th, 2023 at 8:03 am
Thanks Sadje. It was a good exercise 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
May 7th, 2023 at 9:07 am
Yes it was fun, but not easy to write I feel.
LikeLiked by 1 person
May 7th, 2023 at 12:12 pm
They were a bit tricky…true that! 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
May 7th, 2023 at 12:48 pm
I tried to write one. But there was much that I wanted to say and 11 words weren’t enough.
LikeLiked by 1 person