renaissance
there’s still some brokenness in me
others can’t see
crazy missteps and little deaths
the depth and breath
of every choice I’ve made, and yet
I can’t forget
there’s little time for vain regret
even in failure there’s a light
guiding my steps to get things right
others can’t see, the depth and breath I can’t forget
~kat
The Oviellejo is an Old Spanish verse form (derived from ovillo, a ball of yarn). A stanza consists of 10 lines, with a rhyme scheme of AABBCCCDDC. The second line of each rhyme scheme, Line 2,4,6, is short line of up to 5 syllables. The last line is a “redondilla,” a “little round” that collects all three of the short lines.
August 21st, 2019 at 10:00 pm
A beautiful poem.
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August 21st, 2019 at 10:01 pm
Thank you Sadje. ❤️
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August 21st, 2019 at 10:02 pm
You’re welcome Kat.
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August 22nd, 2019 at 6:28 am
Beautiful 💜
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