she is somewhere hidden amidst the stars
face gone dark this black moon night
to sleep, to dream ‘til dawn
~kat
Kimo poems are an Israeli version of haikqApparently, there was a need for more syllables in Hebrew. That said, most of the rules are still familiar:
• 3 lines.
• No rhymes.
• 10 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second, and 6 in the third.
Also, the kimo is focused on a single frozen image (kind of like a snapshot). So it’s uncommon to have any movement happening in kimo poems.
July 31st, 2019 at 10:48 pm
❤️
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August 1st, 2019 at 12:05 am
Lovely!
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August 1st, 2019 at 6:38 pm
Thank you! 😊
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August 1st, 2019 at 2:18 pm
It’s been a good month. Very enjoyable.
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August 1st, 2019 at 6:40 pm
Thank you Peter! No to put my thinking cap on for August’s new form. Stay tuned! 😊
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August 4th, 2019 at 5:11 pm
Groovy 😎😎😎
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August 4th, 2019 at 6:33 pm
Thanks Dorna! 😊
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