adieu
hopeless
traces of ink
blotted melancholy
requiem on a crumpled page
ghosted
~kat
A Cinquain for Colleen Chesebro’s Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge – Synonyms Only for the prompt words: sad (hopeless, melancholy) and write (trace, ink, blot, ghost).
August 23rd, 2018 at 6:58 am
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Reena’s Pay It Forward Thursday pick of the week.
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August 23rd, 2018 at 8:44 am
i like blotted requiem, like an unfinished symphony
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August 23rd, 2018 at 8:45 am
sorry I meant to type blotted melancholy,
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August 23rd, 2018 at 9:54 am
Thank you… itโs all good. ๐
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August 23rd, 2018 at 9:56 am
Yes. Thank you. ๐
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August 23rd, 2018 at 11:45 am
Your choice of words and your message are fabulous, Kat. I really love this cinquain. So expressive. โค
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August 23rd, 2018 at 12:33 pm
Thanks so much Colleen. โค
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August 23rd, 2018 at 12:41 pm
Fabulous! ๐๐ฅ
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August 23rd, 2018 at 2:03 pm
Thank you Dorna
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August 23rd, 2018 at 2:02 pm
Beautiful Kat
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August 23rd, 2018 at 2:02 pm
Thanks Willow! ๐
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August 23rd, 2018 at 2:05 pm
๐๐
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August 23rd, 2018 at 2:55 pm
Brilliant piece, Kat!
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August 23rd, 2018 at 7:06 pm
Thank you Eugenia! ๐
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August 24th, 2018 at 10:21 am
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August 25th, 2018 at 5:14 pm
I love all of the different kinds of poetry that you try and share! So amazing
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August 25th, 2018 at 9:24 pm
Thank you Lynn. What I need to do is like you are doing…get a book or two of them published! I am so inspired by you! ๐
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August 27th, 2018 at 3:03 pm
Yes you do!!
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August 28th, 2018 at 7:30 am
๐๐โค๏ธ
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August 27th, 2018 at 2:04 am
[…] adieu | like mercury colliding… […]
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