Photo by © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
He and his partner waited in the shadows until the others turned the corner. It would be a textbook block and bump. Easy.
Mortie approached the woman, feigning distress.
She didn’t respond. Instead, Officer Jillian Reed flashed a badge and pistol, “Stop! You’re under arrest!”
In seconds they were surrounded.
“Jillie?” Mortie cried.
“Busted, Uncle Mort. It’s high time you retired.”
~kat
(100 Words)
For Rochelle Wisoff-Fields Friday Fictioneers 100 Word Story Challenge based on her own photo pictured above.
like mercury colliding... 
June 29th, 2017 at 10:47 pm
Ha! Served him right!
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June 29th, 2017 at 11:45 pm
Yep! 😉
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June 29th, 2017 at 11:11 pm
I had to read the title twice… I thought it was Lager 🍺
Whoops!
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June 29th, 2017 at 11:46 pm
Haha. Gotta love the English language Michael! 😊
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June 29th, 2017 at 11:49 pm
😉
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June 30th, 2017 at 2:23 am
Brilliant I didn’t see that coming 💗💖
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June 30th, 2017 at 6:09 am
Thanks Willow. Jillian had an inside advantage.
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June 30th, 2017 at 4:28 am
I know I shouldn’t but I feel a bit sorry for Uncle Mortie! Still he should have retired while the going was good!
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June 30th, 2017 at 6:11 am
I know. She did have a bit of an advantage. 😉
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June 30th, 2017 at 5:11 am
Not the ending I was expecting! Nicely done
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June 30th, 2017 at 11:53 am
Thank you Keith. 😊
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June 30th, 2017 at 7:32 am
Dear Kat,
Be sure your sin will find you out. 😉 You made me laugh out loud. Good one!
Shalom,
Rochelle
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June 30th, 2017 at 9:48 am
Thank you Rochelle. I’m afraid she had insider intel. 😉
Peace,
Kat
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June 30th, 2017 at 9:00 am
Ah-ha! Clever little twist at the end. Guess Mortie got his just deserts. Cheers, Varad
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June 30th, 2017 at 11:52 am
Thanks Varad! Had fun with this tale! 😊
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June 30th, 2017 at 11:01 am
Loved the irony. Great take.
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June 30th, 2017 at 11:51 am
Thanks. She knew his MO! 😀
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June 30th, 2017 at 4:34 pm
Lovely tale, well done Kat.
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June 30th, 2017 at 5:52 pm
Thank you Peter. 😊
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June 30th, 2017 at 5:36 pm
Uncle Mort must be the ‘black sheep’ of the family. Great story!
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June 30th, 2017 at 5:56 pm
Indeed! Thanks to his niece the streets will be a bit safer for tourists. 😉
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June 30th, 2017 at 5:44 pm
This was a fun read.
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June 30th, 2017 at 5:57 pm
Thanks! It was fun writing it!
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June 30th, 2017 at 6:24 pm
I laught to, lovely
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June 30th, 2017 at 7:09 pm
Thanks Michael. Bittersweet. ❤️
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June 30th, 2017 at 10:07 pm
Fun story, Kat. Yep, it sounds like he should have retired earlier!
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June 30th, 2017 at 11:28 pm
Yep! Busted! 😊
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July 1st, 2017 at 2:18 pm
WONDERFUL!! This left me thinking of family get-togethers, and whispers of Mortie’s shady career, and the young nephews thinking he’s cool. This was really, really good, Kat. :o)
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July 1st, 2017 at 2:39 pm
Yep! She had a insider info on him! 😊
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July 1st, 2017 at 3:54 pm
Now that’s some Crazy-Funny Justice. 😎😎🌹🌹🌹
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July 1st, 2017 at 7:46 pm
Just goes to show you shouldn’t brag in front of the nieces and nephews! 😜
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July 2nd, 2017 at 3:25 pm
Absolutely agreed. 😉
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July 2nd, 2017 at 3:49 am
Ha, family or no family she’s going to do her job and besides, as she hints, he’s had a good run, time for some one else to win
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July 2nd, 2017 at 12:36 pm
Yep! She’s a professional, just like her uncle! Haha!
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July 5th, 2017 at 2:09 pm
I didn’t expect that ending. Busted, Uncle Mortie!
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July 5th, 2017 at 9:36 pm
Yep…poor old scamp. His time was up!
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