take care not to fill that cold space too soon left in the wake of a visit from death surrender to wafts of scent left behind departing remnants of life in a room savor the sweetness with each inhaled breath as memories of life shared fill your mind the world can spin on without you today turn off your phone, brew some tea, get some rest focus on you right now, grieving takes time for some days, months, more; there is no right way no reason or rhyme
~kat
Na/GloPoWriMo2022 - Day 16 Prompt: Write a Curtal Sonnet (see the description below). Since i am deep in the thick of it these days, taking full advantage of the Melancholy Muse who lurks in from the shadows to show her face in times like these.
The curtal sonnet consists of 10 lines written in iambic pentameter and a final line consisting of a single spondee (or foot consisting of two long or stressed syllables). Here's the rhyme scheme:
Line 1: a Line 2: b Line 3: c Line 4: a Line 5: b Line 6: c Line 7: d Line 8: b Line 9: c Line 10: d Line 11: c
So it is easier for you to find all the parts/chapters of my ongoing fiction series, I created a new page that lists all the links. You can check it out HERE!
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April 16th, 2022 at 2:00 pm
You did a great job of describing loss in this eloquent sonnet. And you wove in the prompt’s rhyme scheme. Wonderful!
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April 16th, 2022 at 5:01 pm
Thank you LuAnne. this is my first time trying this form. I really like the rhyme scheme…it’s not sing-song in the least!
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April 16th, 2022 at 7:13 pm
I’m impressed that you could pull that off. I wasn’t successful at all!
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April 16th, 2022 at 2:21 pm
This so true and you have crafted it perfectly 💜💜
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