it shouldn’t surprise us how nonchalantly death steals away our breath in just a blink without considering that we have things to do life to live, we’re not through no death don’t care the cruel fact of it is when it’s your time to go you can bet death will show ready or not immortality’s not for mere mortals like us just accept it, don’t fuss enjoy the ride
~kat
For Tanka Tuesday’s Theme Prompt this week: “Immortality”, the Abhanga, which is: · stanzaic, written in any number of quatrains (4 line stanzas). · syllabic, 6/6/6/4 syllables each · rhymed L2 and L3 rhyme. Often internal rhyme is employed. End rhyme scheme x a a x , x being unrhymed.
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March 17th, 2021 at 12:19 am
Enjoy the ride!
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March 17th, 2021 at 10:18 am
yes indeed!
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March 17th, 2021 at 11:15 am
👍👍👍
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March 17th, 2021 at 8:29 am
I can hear you rapping this one Kat!
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March 17th, 2021 at 10:17 am
Oh my goodness Peter! This made me laugh out loud! 🤣😂🤣
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March 17th, 2021 at 11:00 am
There’s no charge to friends!
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March 17th, 2021 at 12:11 pm
powerful words! And all in abhanga too. Amazing.
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March 17th, 2021 at 12:12 pm
Thank you Erlyn. it is a new form for me. i enjoy it very much! 😊
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March 17th, 2021 at 3:53 pm
Kat, I’ve missed you! I love this Abhanga series. The rhythm is perfect! It could be a song. ❤
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March 18th, 2021 at 7:05 am
Thank you Colleen. I love this form. ❤️ so fun!
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March 18th, 2021 at 7:56 am
Have you tried the diatelle? It’s syllabic and also has end rhyme schemes. ❤️
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March 18th, 2021 at 1:23 pm
That was next on my list! 😊
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March 18th, 2021 at 2:22 pm
Oh, you’re going to love that one. ❤
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March 19th, 2021 at 10:21 am
This is absolutely brilliant, perfect disapline, great words, it paints the picture and has great meaning 💜💜
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March 19th, 2021 at 2:26 pm
thank you Willow. this is my first attempt at this form. i really like it! ❤️💜❤️
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March 19th, 2021 at 4:00 pm
It’s beautiful 💜
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March 19th, 2021 at 2:22 pm
A touch of profundity.
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March 19th, 2021 at 2:25 pm
hi Jude! Hope you are doing well. Thanks!
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March 20th, 2021 at 4:06 am
Hello Kat. I’m fair. Hope you are well too
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March 22nd, 2021 at 10:47 pm
Hugs Jude. The past year has been exhausting. I am well. Thank you.
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March 25th, 2021 at 9:03 am
🤗🍁
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March 22nd, 2021 at 12:11 am
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