the darkest night cannot resist
dawn’s gentle kiss
it’s shrouds of mist hovering low
in amber glow
the coo of a lone dove, mourning,
greets the morning
sparkling dew droplets, adorning
tenderly, sweet flowers in bloom,
another day commences soon,
dawn’s gentle kiss in amber glow greets the morning
~kat
The Oviellejo is an Old Spanish verse form (derived from ovillo, a ball of yarn). A stanza consists of 10 lines, with a rhyme scheme of AABBCCCDDC. The second line of each rhyme scheme, Line 2,4,6, is short line of up to 5 syllables. The last line is a “redondilla,” a “little round” that collects all three of the short lines.
August 2nd, 2019 at 12:27 pm
“the coo of a lone dove, mourning,
greets the morning”…This really captured the imagery and is perhaps my favourite line in this poem!
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August 2nd, 2019 at 1:56 pm
Thank you Tien. Truth be told I wrestled a bit with that Stanza! 😉
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August 2nd, 2019 at 11:22 pm
It came out great. 😃
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August 3rd, 2019 at 6:31 am
Thank you 😊
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August 2nd, 2019 at 12:39 pm
What lovely poetry.
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August 2nd, 2019 at 4:23 pm
Thank you Sadje. 😊
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August 2nd, 2019 at 4:38 pm
You’re welcome
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August 2nd, 2019 at 5:28 pm
This is lovely 💜
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August 2nd, 2019 at 5:54 pm
Thanks Willow. 😊
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August 2nd, 2019 at 6:40 pm
Pleasure 💜
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August 4th, 2019 at 4:01 pm
Grooviness 😎 😎 (its’) check on that with it’s
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August 4th, 2019 at 4:56 pm
Thanks Dorna. 😍
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