dust to dust
before dust settles, it lingers a spell,
dancing on warm sunlit streams
by day, moonbeams at night
~kat
Kimo poems are an Israeli version of haikqApparently, there was a need for more syllables in Hebrew. That said, most of the rules are still familiar:
• 3 lines.
• No rhymes.
• 10 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second, and 6 in the third.
Also, the kimo is focused on a single frozen image (kind of like a snapshot). So it’s uncommon to have any movement happening in kimo poems.
July 22nd, 2019 at 10:26 am
Fractals and dust mites 😉💜💜💜
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July 22nd, 2019 at 11:23 am
Yep! haha! Death to my sinuses!!!
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July 22nd, 2019 at 1:05 pm
Lol 🤣🤣🤣🤣
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July 22nd, 2019 at 12:16 pm
What an image you have created!
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July 22nd, 2019 at 12:39 pm
Thank you Sadje!
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July 22nd, 2019 at 12:48 pm
You’re welcome Kat!
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July 22nd, 2019 at 12:31 pm
There you are. My previous dust comment can suffice here too!
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