Sevenling (midsummer)
midsummer sun lingers, still,
tarrying into the gloaming, night,
illuminating our dreams
fare thee well, sweet spring,
first blossoms, blooms on the wind,
now plump into fat, first fruits
scent of cut grass and roses wafting
~kat
The elements of the Sevenling are:
1. a heptastich, a poem in 7 lines made up of 2 tercets followed by a single line.
2. metered at the discretion of the poet.
3. unrhymed.
4. composed with 3 complimentary images in the first tercet and 3 parallel images in the second tercet. The end line is a juxtaposed summary of the 2 parallels, a sort of “punchline”.
5. the poem should be titled “Sevenling: (first few words of poem).
June 21st, 2019 at 9:37 pm
wow! This is excellent, Kat. I love it. ❤
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June 21st, 2019 at 9:39 pm
Thank you Colleen. ❤️
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June 21st, 2019 at 10:45 pm
A lovely poem.
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June 21st, 2019 at 10:47 pm
Thank you Sadje. 😊
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June 21st, 2019 at 10:56 pm
You’re welcome Kat.
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June 22nd, 2019 at 3:44 am
Beautiful 💜💜
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June 22nd, 2019 at 10:50 am
Thank you Willow! 😊
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June 22nd, 2019 at 2:11 pm
Spent all afternoon in the garden, weeding, tidying, planting. Bliss!
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June 22nd, 2019 at 2:20 pm
That is bliss…and oh, the sun did come out yesterday and it stayed a little longer than usual! 😉
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