Sevenling (flying lessons)
the flying lessons commence
trembling fledglings, wings aflutter
flapping wildly, catching air, to freedom
the nest is silent now, remnants
of feathers, berry pits, seed chaff
scattered amidst brittle twigs and twine
never to return, she waits by the phone
~kat
The elements of the Sevenling are:
1. a heptastich, a poem in 7 lines made up of 2 tercets followed by a single line.
2. metered at the discretion of the poet.
3. unrhymed.
4. composed with 3 complimentary images in the first tercet and 3 parallel images in the second tercet. The end line is a juxtaposed summary of the 2 parallels, a sort of “punchline”.
5. the poem should be titled “Sevenling: (first few words of poem).
June 14th, 2019 at 10:56 pm
All mothers go through this. We teach them to fly and then wait for them to return of their own accord.
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June 14th, 2019 at 11:02 pm
Yes. It is true.
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June 14th, 2019 at 11:46 pm
👍👌
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June 14th, 2019 at 11:03 pm
Brilliant!
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June 14th, 2019 at 11:10 pm
Thank you Dave.
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June 15th, 2019 at 11:15 am
Love this Kat. A sight that never ceases to delight me!
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June 15th, 2019 at 2:21 pm
And another true story…our nest of house sparrows we’re ready to fly this weekend! ❤️
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June 15th, 2019 at 3:38 pm
We have so many babies around at this time of year that our food bill hits record highs!
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June 17th, 2019 at 5:26 pm
Beautiful 💜
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June 17th, 2019 at 6:45 pm
Thank you Willow!
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June 17th, 2019 at 6:53 pm
Sorry I am running so behind 💜💜
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June 17th, 2019 at 9:04 pm
No worries! I’m running out of steam myself. Looks like you had a lovely time at the Bash though! What fun! 😊
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June 18th, 2019 at 2:37 am
It was absolutely brilliant 💜
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June 18th, 2019 at 8:05 pm
❤️💜❤️
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