domesticated
my fierce predator, roams the halls at night
seeking prey, a twisty tie, dust bunnies,
wayward crickets, balls of yarn,
lying there catching sunbeams
i watch him sleep, dreaming
of mice that got away
~kat
A Kimo Poem for NaPoWriMo 2019 Prompt #23: write a poem about an animal.
Kimo Poems
Kimo poems are an Israeli version of haiku. Apparently, there was a need for more syllables in Hebrew. That said, most of the rules are still familiar:
• 3 lines.
• No rhymes.
• 10 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second, and 6 in the third.
Also, the kimo is focused on a single frozen image (kind of like a snapshot). So it’s uncommon to have any movement happening in kimo poems.
April 24th, 2019 at 9:58 am
This is so cat 💜💜
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April 24th, 2019 at 11:48 am
Isn’t it though. My cats prefer catnip-infused, faux fur mice. Such divas! haha!
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April 24th, 2019 at 12:21 pm
Oh! I love that 💜
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April 24th, 2019 at 10:15 pm
We actually had a rat get inside. It scared the cats! Me too!!!! 😳
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April 25th, 2019 at 2:01 am
I hate rats too big! Some people keep them as pets. Apparently they make good pets. Not the wild ones though. 💜
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April 25th, 2019 at 6:40 am
That’s for sure!!! 😳
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April 25th, 2019 at 10:16 am
Eeeeeek
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April 24th, 2019 at 10:18 pm
They were doing a renovation nearby. A bunch of neighbors had unwanted visitors that week. But the worst part for us was one got in our oven and then got int back and got electrocuted! Ewwweee! The smell! But I did get a new gas range out of the ordeal!!! 🤪
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April 25th, 2019 at 2:00 am
We had mice in the first home we had, they used to get into our oven. It was a gas oven and the must of used the pipes. I don’t know. Anyway we got a cat and that solved the problem. None died but we could smell them until they left! It’s great you got a new oven though🤭💜
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April 25th, 2019 at 1:33 pm
Sweet. (@—>—)
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April 25th, 2019 at 1:48 pm
Love my critters! thanks Dorna!
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