soft the light plays, dawning
dreams give way to longing
~kat
For Jane Dougherty’s Poem-a-Day Challenge…Florette #3…28 to go. 🤔
soft the light plays, dawning
dreams give way to longing
~kat
For Jane Dougherty’s Poem-a-Day Challenge…Florette #3…28 to go. 🤔
March 3rd, 2018 at 12:12 pm
Truly beautiful 💜
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March 3rd, 2018 at 12:13 pm
Thank you Willow. These are a truly a labour of love…❤️
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March 3rd, 2018 at 1:22 pm
Yes they are💜
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March 3rd, 2018 at 12:13 pm
Another good one 🙂 We’ll battle on, shoulder to shoulder.
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March 3rd, 2018 at 12:19 pm
Thank you Jane…this one only took half a morning to muster! ❤️
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March 3rd, 2018 at 12:22 pm
I’ve had some really great six syllable lines and not been able to find a rhyme in the middle.
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March 3rd, 2018 at 12:29 pm
That is the tricky part. I’m also bothered by the six syllables, when seven feels better in the reread.
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March 3rd, 2018 at 2:46 pm
I’d always rather have beats than syllables, but that’s the rule…
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March 3rd, 2018 at 4:14 pm
I agree! 😊
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March 3rd, 2018 at 4:37 pm
🙂
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