Cork Screw
he called her ‘honey’
after he’d had too much wine
it made her skin crawl
dry with a tinge bittersweet
he never said it sober
~kat
A Tanka for Colleen Chesebro’s Weekly Poetry Challenge, prompt words, Honey & Wine.
August 15, 2017
Cork Screw
12 responses to “Cork Screw”
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August 15th, 2017 at 11:24 am
Excellent twist at the end and one I thought about too. Well done. ❤
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August 15th, 2017 at 12:02 pm
We must have crossed a few intersections you and I in our parallel universes. ❤️
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August 15th, 2017 at 12:04 pm
Oh, yes. I recognized your soul immediately. I have that connection with quite a few people. They recognize me too. ❤
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August 15th, 2017 at 1:09 pm
You are definitely one of my people. 😊
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August 15th, 2017 at 2:05 pm
Oh, yeah! Are you on Facebook? My friend and I have a group called the Truth Seekers you might enjoy. I found your page but not your profile. Somewhere to blow off political steam. 😀
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August 15th, 2017 at 2:07 pm
I have a wordpress FB link page and a private.
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August 15th, 2017 at 2:09 pm
You can find me here if you want. I think we have to be friends first. It is a secret group: https://www.facebook.com/colleen.chesebro.3
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August 15th, 2017 at 12:21 pm
Nice verse. 🙂 cheers
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August 15th, 2017 at 1:10 pm
Thank you Julien.
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August 16th, 2017 at 6:20 pm
Captivating as always. 🥀🥀🥀
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August 16th, 2017 at 6:42 pm
Thanks Dorna. ❤️
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August 22nd, 2017 at 2:03 am
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