nature calling
how tempted am I to lose myself here
deep, deeper still, hidden from the dawn
“I’ll be back soon,” I lie, “I won’t be long.”
far off the path, no turning back, no fear
deep, deeper still, hidden from the dawn
how tempted am I to lose myself here
~kat
Poetry Form: the Biolet
The Biolet is a six line poem, and like the triolet, the first two lines are repeated as the last two lines, however in reverse. The rhyme scheme of the biolet thus can be expressed as ABbaBA (with the capital letters representing the repeated lines). The length of the lines can be in iambic tetrameter (8 syllables), iambic pentameter (10 syllables), iambic hexameter (12 syllables), or in unmetered lines of random lengths.
like mercury colliding... 
May 16th, 2024 at 1:16 am
It’s a beautiful poem! The pull of nature and to be alone with oneself is strong at times.
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May 16th, 2024 at 6:09 am
Thank you Sadje. Spending time in nature can truly be healing. 💚
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May 16th, 2024 at 6:30 am
So true Kat
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May 16th, 2024 at 2:30 am
This is beautiful , if it real , don’t let the pressure push you too deep hold on to a thread 💜💜
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May 16th, 2024 at 6:07 am
Thank you Willow…and all is well…just poetic musings. 😉💚💚
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May 16th, 2024 at 6:39 am
iva so pleased to hear that 💜💜
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May 16th, 2024 at 6:57 am
It would be so easy to immerse oneself in that hillside, build a den, and forget the stupidity of the world!
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May 16th, 2024 at 3:00 pm
I agree! Would you believe this is my back yard? I count my blessings every day. 😊
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May 16th, 2024 at 8:21 am
More than tempting…a balm for the soul
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May 16th, 2024 at 8:36 am
So true VJ. I love the season of greening!
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