obliquity
after days of rain
the shallow rooted pine
succumbed to gravity
bare limbs brushing the clay
thicket creeper creeping
~kat
For today, a gogyohka. It’s meant to be concise (five lines) but free (variable line length with each phrase). No special seasonal or cutting words. No subject matter constraints. Just five lines of poetic phrases.
May 23rd, 2020 at 5:05 am
The rain is stronger than the tree
It’s power has set roots free
No longer held fast like me
Rooted to the spot, still it lies for all to see
Waiting for new life, which I will never be.
Your gogyohka moved me Kat.💜💜
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May 23rd, 2020 at 6:21 am
So beautiful Willow! ❤️💜❤️
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May 23rd, 2020 at 6:29 am
Thank you Kat but your poem inspired me💜
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May 23rd, 2020 at 7:11 am
Exceptional gogyohka
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May 23rd, 2020 at 3:44 pm
Thank you Jude!
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May 24th, 2020 at 12:03 am
My pleasure
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