what if wild roses plainly said
you must be red
it is the color flowers should be
rose red like me
to be true blooms, pale pink won’t do
you can’t be blue
what if birds dissed each other’s tunes
and trees made fun of shrubbery
just think how silly that would be
you must be red, rose red like me, you can’t be blue
~kat
The Oviellejo is an Old Spanish verse form (derived from ovillo, a ball of yarn). A stanza consists of 10 lines, with a rhyme scheme of AABBCCCDDC. The second line of each rhyme scheme, Line 2,4,6, is short line of up to 5 syllables. The last line is a “redondilla,” a “little round” that collects all three of the short lines.
August 14th, 2019 at 1:47 pm
I love this one. With the state of the world as it is, it is not beyond the realms of possibility!
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August 14th, 2019 at 2:24 pm
My goodness, I hope not. Nature and her lessons are our saving grace. ❤️
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August 14th, 2019 at 2:05 pm
What if we were as accepting as them.
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August 14th, 2019 at 2:23 pm
In truth the world would be a much more beautiful place if we took our cues from nature!
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August 14th, 2019 at 3:33 pm
Indeed! If only.
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August 14th, 2019 at 4:11 pm
Another cool form! And a fair question. What if indeed? No, only people put out such restrictive ideas and conditions.
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August 14th, 2019 at 5:41 pm
Exactly! 👍
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August 18th, 2019 at 5:51 pm
Groovy 😎😎😎
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