It was a lovely detour. I was away for a brief holiday spent on the shore of the Atlantic. Now that I’m back, time to head into another poetry form for July. The Kimo. Here’s the first one. Description below.
the years have a way of blurring the past,
life infused with bitter and sweet
a blessed fugue of bliss
~kat
Kimo poems are an Israeli version of haiku. Apparently, there was a need for more syllables in Hebrew. That said, most of the rules are still familiar:
• 3 lines.
• No rhymes.
• 10 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second, and 6 in the third.
Also, the kimo is focused on a single frozen image (kind of like a snapshot). So it’s uncommon to have any movement happening in kimo poems.
July 2nd, 2019 at 1:54 am
This is an interesting form Kat. The syllable count so random to my mind with no repartition. Yet you have written a beautiful poem that makes complete sense.💜💜
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July 2nd, 2019 at 6:47 am
Thanks Willow. I love the three liners. 😊
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July 2nd, 2019 at 1:48 pm
🤭😃💜
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July 2nd, 2019 at 5:19 am
It’s lovely Kat.
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July 3rd, 2019 at 7:23 am
Thank you Di
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July 4th, 2019 at 12:30 pm
Fabulous 😎
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