Anthem
Oh, say can you see by the dawn’s early light
mothers counting empty beds, oh, how they weep, take to the streets where their children sleep in pooling crimson seas
What so proudly we hailed at the twilight’s last gleaming?
tiki torches blazing, raised stiff hands salute, ‘all hail’, exposed white faces spitting bile would smite true patriots who bend a knee
Whose broad stripes and bright stars through the perilous fight,
those who dare, rise in humility, to challenge twisted liberty, lay prostrate at the mercy of the courts for fans to see,
O’er the ramparts we watched were so gallantly streaming?
throngs clamoring at the gates, fleeing terror, death and hate, hoping they are not too late, but freedom is not free
And the rocket’s red glare, the bombs bursting in air,
blinding smoke bombards the moat where orphaned children flail and choke, acid tears now streaming down their cheeks
Gave proof through the night that our flag was still there.
barely recognizable, flaunted proudly, all for show, allegiance pledged as madness grows, this bitter fruit we sowed to reap
Oh, say does that star-spangled banner yet wave
with nothing left to show but our disdain for truth, our love of lies, all this is proof that we have squandered our humanity
O’er the land of the free and the home of the brave?
cowards all, ignoring the call, from our tongues deadly poison falls, scorching the ground from shining to the rising seas
~kat
For NaPoWriMo 2019 Prompt #22: write a poem that engages with another art form – it might be about a friend of yours who paints or sculpts, your high school struggles with learning to play the French horn, or a wonderful painting, film, or piece of music you’ve experienced – anything is in bounds here, so long as it uses the poem to express something about another form of art.
April 22nd, 2019 at 2:51 pm
Well done! Makes you really think!
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April 22nd, 2019 at 4:26 pm
Thank you Regina. It does…I think we need a new anthem, imho.
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April 22nd, 2019 at 4:22 pm
Very well done Kat, sadly so!
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April 22nd, 2019 at 4:35 pm
Thanks Peter. It reminded me of a cleave poem as I was writing it, except I wanted to be sure each original line launched off the preceding verse. BTW…I’m collecting poems in a digital binder. Haven’t forgotten my book deadline! 😉
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April 22nd, 2019 at 5:16 pm
Good girl. You may have a chocolate treat!
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April 22nd, 2019 at 6:04 pm
Thank you Peter! 😄
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April 22nd, 2019 at 8:58 pm
Hard-hitting, for sure.
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April 22nd, 2019 at 9:43 pm
Sometimes I wonder where these ideas come from? Sure there is the prompt, but sometimes I wonder. It’s a mystery. 😄
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April 22nd, 2019 at 10:22 pm
You are a deep well, my dear…bringing up full buckets of creative lines ALL the time, never a dry day 🙂
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April 22nd, 2019 at 10:52 pm
Thanks Ennle. I shall remember that next dry spell! 😉
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April 22nd, 2019 at 11:15 pm
Never happen!
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April 23rd, 2019 at 5:32 am
Truth justice and the American way…we’ve lost them all.
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April 23rd, 2019 at 11:57 am
I do believe all those things are still there…just suppressed right now but those currently in power. If we are paying attention and vote, we still have a chance to turn things around…at least I’m hoping so. If we don’t then I am afraid for us all. 😦
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April 23rd, 2019 at 9:18 pm
Yes, start local, that’s where the change starts.
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April 23rd, 2019 at 9:54 pm
Absolutely! Can’t give up!
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April 23rd, 2019 at 11:57 am
This is an endless, timeless tale for too many generations. (@—>—)
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April 23rd, 2019 at 12:16 pm
Maybe one day we will get it right….
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