we hide in bubbles
existence, isolated
chiming in with those
who fancy our delusions
safety is an illusion
~kat~
For Colleen Chesebro’s Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge, prompt words: Belong: Exist, Chime & Dream: Bubble, Fancy, Delusion, Illusion.
May 10th, 2018 at 8:13 am
This is so true 💜💜
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May 10th, 2018 at 7:03 pm
Yes. It is!
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May 10th, 2018 at 1:56 pm
Amen. 😇😎🥀
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May 10th, 2018 at 5:39 pm
Yes! So true. 😎
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May 10th, 2018 at 4:32 pm
Wow! This Tanka hit me like a ton of bricks! Excellent emotions expressed here. Love it, Kat! ❤
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May 10th, 2018 at 4:38 pm
Thank you Colleen. We all have our bubbles. It’s so easy to isolates oneself.
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May 10th, 2018 at 6:41 pm
I agree. We retreat to what is most comfortable for each of us. Excellent poetry! ❤
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May 10th, 2018 at 7:05 pm
Though I do check and verify…at least I try to! 🤓
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May 14th, 2018 at 2:05 am
[…] Bubbles | like mercury colliding… […]
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