amidst the fescue seas
a pair of blooming trees
hint of spice on the breeze, birds in tryst
~kat
I absolutely mangled my first go at this new form by Jane Dougherty, the Florescence, by completely overlooking the final rhyme. As promised, my do-over. A little more “spicy” than the first, which I like very much! Amazing what comes of following the rules! 😉
like mercury colliding... 
April 1st, 2018 at 12:28 pm
The spice makes all the difference! Glad you persevered. I did quite a few of them to make sure it was possible and my first attempt wasn’t just a fluke. I like your bird tryst 🙂
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April 1st, 2018 at 2:16 pm
I really do like the form Jane. Especially the twist in the last line. It’s going to be fun to experiment with.
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April 2nd, 2018 at 12:13 pm
I’m glad you like it 🙂
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April 1st, 2018 at 1:22 pm
Nicely done. 💜
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April 1st, 2018 at 2:09 pm
Thank you Willow. I actually like the second one better. I’m such a rule-breaker…sometimes they’re there for my own good! 😀
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April 1st, 2018 at 3:53 pm
No you brake every rule be yourself, and I am just the same 💜
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April 1st, 2018 at 4:27 pm
In good company, I see! 🙂
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April 1st, 2018 at 4:30 pm
Yes indeed 💜
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April 1st, 2018 at 7:14 pm
Beautiful attempt..😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀
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April 1st, 2018 at 8:45 pm
Thanks. Nailed it the second try! 😊
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