January 25, 2018

Empty

By Kat Myrman

photo by Thomas Shellberg via Unsplash

dark house echoing
empty nest
gone are her children

~kat

A Lune Poem (5/3/5) for Sonya’s Three Line Tale challenge inspired by this photo by Thomas Shellberg via Unsplash

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This entry was posted on Thursday, January 25th, 2018 at 1:04 pm and tagged with 3linetales, Challenge, empty nest, Flash Fiction, Lune, Photo Prompt, Poetry and posted in 3 Line Tales, Challenges and Writing Prompts, Lune, Poetry, Random Thoughts and Musings. You can follow any responses to this entry through the RSS 2.0 feed.

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14 responses to “Empty”

• mandibelle16
  January 25th, 2018 at 1:09 pm

  Powerful and effective lune. So much and three lines.

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  • Kat Myrman
    January 25th, 2018 at 1:19 pm

    Thanks Mandi. I think the photograph helps add emotion to the piece.

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    • leegschrift
      January 25th, 2018 at 1:21 pm

      Beautiful picture also.

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• beehalton2
  January 25th, 2018 at 2:25 pm

  Beautiful words . They touched me.

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  • Kat Myrman
    January 25th, 2018 at 2:27 pm

    Thank you Bee. ❤️

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    • beehalton2
      January 25th, 2018 at 2:39 pm

      Anytime 😊

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• duskalert
  January 25th, 2018 at 3:39 pm

  The power of the three lines.!
  Deep.

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  • Kat Myrman
    January 25th, 2018 at 3:42 pm

    Thank you. Three lines and only 13 syllables! 😉

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• duskalert
  January 25th, 2018 at 3:49 pm

  Haha😁 but that is what you call a creativity.!!!! 👌

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  • Kat Myrman
    January 25th, 2018 at 4:10 pm

    Thank you again! 😉

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    • duskalert
      January 25th, 2018 at 4:11 pm

      Pleasure.! 😊💖
      Xxx

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• dornahainds
  January 25th, 2018 at 4:30 pm

  Excellent! 😎🥀

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• anotherfoodieblogger
  January 26th, 2018 at 10:45 am

  I feel that way with my Hannah gone and daughter off to college. 😦

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  • Kat Myrman
    January 26th, 2018 at 10:46 am

    Hugs Kathryn. Empty nesting can be quite an adjustment. ❤️

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