
Photo Credit: pixabay.com…It’s been a day!
Happy…happy? Monday? Sometimes Mondays are…MONDAYS! Oh I’m being polite. Sometimes Monday’s are a BITCH! Today was one of THOSE Mondays!
But I made a commitment to try a new poetry form each day this month, and so I shall! I give you the “Lai”. It’s French for “Lai”. At least that’s what my translator says. Original eh?!
The Lai is at least one stanza of nine lines with 2 rhymes between lines “a” and “b”. The rhyme sequence is: aabaabaab. And just to make it interesting, the “a” lines have 5 syllables and the “b” lines have 2 syllables. Got it?
It’s a challenging little form. If you’re adventurous, there is a variation called the Lai Nouveau with similar rhyme sequences, 16 lines and repeating lines! Yikes! I think I’ll save that for a day when I have a brain! Today all I got is a lai poem about a lai!
The Lai
This form is called Lai
one stanza, nine lines
Let’s see…
It follows strict rhyme
Line “A” rhymes six times
“B” three
“A” syllable’s five
Two “B”
A challenge to try
This I can’t deny
Oh me!!!
kat ~ 11 April 2016
(I’m even more confused!!!!)
April 11th, 2016 at 9:43 pm
OY Mondays ARE a bitch, aren’t they? Mine was no different. You did a great job of the lai about lai! I don’t think my brain could have pulled this off on a Monday. 🙂
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April 11th, 2016 at 9:49 pm
Haha! I am determined! Thanks for the encouragement! I will do 30 days! I will I will! 😊
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April 11th, 2016 at 9:57 pm
LOL yes you will you will you will! xo
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April 11th, 2016 at 10:05 pm
That image is wonderful for the journey you went through, but you did it! 🙂
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April 11th, 2016 at 10:10 pm
Thanks Olga! Yes I did it! Phew! 😜
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April 11th, 2016 at 10:13 pm
🙂
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