My brain was apparently scattered when I penned my cinquains for Jane Dougherty’s challenge this week. I completely overlooked the prompt words! We were instructed to use at least one of the following: Fly, lightning, verdant, unfurl, softly.
To make up for this oversight I decided to use all five. (All in fun of course and for the love of poetry…) But Jane, I did sweat a few drops of blood over this one! 🙂
P.S. Do I get extra credit? Heehee…kidding of course! 😉
Peace out and have a great weekend peeps!
Photo Credit: Pixabay – https://pixabay.com/photo-84660/
Raptor
wings unfurled
Flies the verdant landscape
Swoops like lightning, softly landing…
Nestingkat ~ 8 April 2016
April 9th, 2016 at 4:33 am
Now you’re just showing off! You didn’t have to use ALL the words 🙂 It’s a great cinquain, Kat and I love the subject you’ve chosen.
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April 9th, 2016 at 6:20 am
I know Jane. I had to have a little fun with it! Thanks for the nudge. I figure it keeps my brain cells alive and ticking. 🙂
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April 9th, 2016 at 6:36 am
You’re never too young for that 🙂
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April 9th, 2016 at 7:25 am
🙂
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April 9th, 2016 at 7:22 pm
Ha! You did a great job using all the prompt words! Great photo to go with it too, I love ospreys. 🙂
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April 9th, 2016 at 9:33 pm
Thanks! I had a bit of fun with this one! 😊
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April 12th, 2016 at 3:37 am
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April 12th, 2016 at 6:30 am
Wonderful! I could feel the raptor swoop!
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April 12th, 2016 at 7:04 am
Even fierce predators have the capacity for tenderness. 🙂
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