Victims of the fray
Slumber ‘neath shrouds of linen
Soon comes the reaper.
(…and a 21st Century version of the haiku above. Thanks to Susan at buildingapoem for the nudge 😊 …making me work for those syllables! )
Victims of the fray
Sleep under shrouds of linen
Soon comes the reaper.
Beyond the veil
Heaven and hell fight for souls
Free Will always wins.
kat ~ 4 March 2016
A few haiku in response to RonovanWrites Haiku challenge prompts: Fray and Veil. If you’d like to read other haiku or enter the challenge, click HERE.
April 4th, 2016 at 9:47 pm
We can only hope that free always wins! But what do we know, right? It’s all a mystery after death.
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April 4th, 2016 at 10:36 pm
Love your visual, Kat. It really accentuates both haiku. 🙂
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April 4th, 2016 at 10:39 pm
Thanks Olga. 😊
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April 4th, 2016 at 10:41 pm
Wow love this!
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April 4th, 2016 at 10:44 pm
Thanks! Tomorrow the grand pup goes home. Then hopefully back to some fiction! 😊
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April 4th, 2016 at 10:45 pm
oh bye bye pup
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April 4th, 2016 at 11:20 pm
‘neath? Really? In the 21st century?
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April 4th, 2016 at 11:44 pm
Haha! Syllables Susan…syllables. 😜
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April 5th, 2016 at 10:59 am
Let’s root for Heaven to win.
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April 5th, 2016 at 10:59 am
Yes! 🙂
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April 5th, 2016 at 8:52 pm
Excellent Kat! We always have a choice how we choose to be and do.
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April 5th, 2016 at 8:53 pm
Yes we do. It’s a gift wrapped in grace. 🙂
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