The Lune/ American Haiku – The lune (rhymes with moon) is a very short poem. It’s similar to the popular haiku form of poetry. While a haiku follows a 5/7/5 syllable pattern, the lune’s syllable pattern is 5/3/5. Typically, since the middle line is restricted to three syllables, it is the shortest line of the three. This gives the lune a curve on the ends similar to a crescent moon.
Lune Poems 3 Spril 2016
Love can motivate
As can hate,
each one can cause pain.
To ride on the wind
Requires
Leaving solid ground.
I know a secret
If I tell
It won’t be secret.
Monkeys will mimic
Ev’ry move.
Toddlers are monkeys!
To keep a secret
Mind your tongue
Once spoken, it’s news.
~kat ~ 3 April 2016




April 3rd, 2016 at 3:12 pm
I like the Luna haiku style! Those are all great. 🙂
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April 3rd, 2016 at 3:18 pm
Thanks! It’s definitely a shift from the haiku. 😊
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April 4th, 2016 at 9:53 am
I like this style and how you wrore it, hmm a secret. Did I miss the addition of the letter?
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April 4th, 2016 at 10:55 am
Not yet…grand puppy goes home in a few days! Then I will have quiet again so I can work on it. He is all puppy!!! 😊
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April 4th, 2016 at 11:17 am
ok will be waiting!
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April 4th, 2016 at 11:25 am
I thought about trying, but he is a lab…constantly panting and running from room to room and tossing toys! It’s been CRAZY! 🙂
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April 4th, 2016 at 11:26 am
hahaha fun times!
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