A trio of Haiku this week in response to Ronovanwrites prompts for this week: Life & Give. if you’d like to participate or read more click HERE.
To give her the moon
He spent a lifetime toiling
She wanted the sun.
Complicated life
Fueling flames of contention
It all ends in dust.
Humans are endowed
With life, liberty and joy!
We grumble for more.
kat ~ 23 November 2015
November 24th, 2015 at 2:33 pm
Fantastic twist hopefully I shall come to be able to address these haiku from different perspectives like you soonish!!
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November 24th, 2015 at 2:35 pm
A Thesaurus and Dictionary are great tools to help one see different takes on a word. They are my inspiration! 🙂
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November 24th, 2015 at 6:06 pm
Thanks for the tip Kat!
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November 24th, 2015 at 5:18 pm
Great poems!
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November 24th, 2015 at 5:29 pm
Thank you Daniela! 😊
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November 25th, 2015 at 12:48 am
Nice set.
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November 25th, 2015 at 12:53 am
Thank you! 😊
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November 25th, 2015 at 3:38 pm
I love the first one so much!
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November 25th, 2015 at 3:40 pm
Isn’t it ironic? But so true! 🙂
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November 25th, 2015 at 3:41 pm
yes it is pure irony!
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November 28th, 2015 at 4:56 pm
Among the top offerings this week so far during my reviewing trip. An excellent amount of observation.
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November 28th, 2015 at 4:57 pm
Thank you kindly. The prompt words worked well together. 🙂
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November 28th, 2015 at 5:00 pm
No being modest this week, claim the amazing writing you did. You owned the words this week.
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November 28th, 2015 at 5:01 pm
Thank you. 🙂
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November 29th, 2015 at 10:52 am
The first is so sad!
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November 29th, 2015 at 11:11 am
Sad indeed…and so often true…
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November 29th, 2015 at 12:04 pm
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December 1st, 2015 at 2:18 pm
These are great, but I do love that first one! 🙂
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December 1st, 2015 at 2:24 pm
Thank you Edwina. Yes the first one has resonated with several people. 🙂
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December 2nd, 2015 at 11:47 am
Ha, ha! I love the trio Kat! Life seems very ironic. 😉
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December 2nd, 2015 at 12:04 pm
Thanks Vashti! Life IS very ironic somettimes 🙂
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