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December Dodoitsu #4

if water coolers could talk
there would be a steady flow
of scandalous scuttlebutt
drip by dirty drop

~kat


December Dodoitsu #3

toxic

from that very first hello,
when you took my breath away,
I’ve been losing parts of me
to make room for us

~kat


December Dodoitsu #2

drop dead deadlines, bottom lines
number crunching, red to black
budget cuts; frozen wages
useless escape key

~kat


December Dodoitsu #1

new lovers will count the ways
pluck soft petals one by one
love or not, besotted be
by whispered nothings

~kat

For December’s daily poem I am exploring the Dodoitsu. Dodoitsu (都々逸) is a form of Japanese poetry developed towards the end of the Edo Period. Often concerning love or work, and usually comical (or perhaps a bit of irony – my take on things humorous), Dodoitsu poems consist of four lines with the syllabic structure 7-7-7-5 and no rhyme for a total of 26 syllables, making it one of the longer Japanese forms. The form, tone and structure of Dodoitsu derive from Japanese folk song traditions. There is also mention of a shortened “American” version called “Prep-Dodoitsu” by deinktvis on DeviantArt. Its syllabic structure is 5-5-5-3 for a total of 18 syllables.