The news has been giddy with “who done it, was it homicide or suicide, how could they let this happen, whose gonna pay now” drivel. All over a vile pediphile’s untimely demise. But I’m still stuck. A little over a week ago, back to school shoppers were gunned down at a Walmart. Just a few days later, other children came home from their first day of school to find their parents missing. And still at our border there are no doubt children wasting away in cages because their parents had the audacity to seek safety for them. What parent wouldn’t do the same for their own children, faced with the threat of death or worse? I’ve been stewing on this Oviellejo for days. I had planned to write about the beautiful sunrise. It was beautiful. But somewhere someone is suffering, and my heart is bleeding. We can’t forget the children. We just can’t.
when children lose their innocence
no recompense
can make up for the damage wrought
it’s a dark spot
that festers slowly over time
it is a crime
ignoring it for a lifetime
can lead to callous, broken souls
no hope of ever being whole
no recompense, it’s a dark spot, it is a crime
~kat
The Oviellejo is an Old Spanish verse form (derived from ovillo, a ball of yarn). A stanza consists of 10 lines, with a rhyme scheme of AABBCCCDDC. The second line of each rhyme scheme, Line 2,4,6, is short line of up to 5 syllables. The last line is a “redondilla,” a “little round” that collects all three of the short lines.
August 12th, 2019 at 8:16 pm
It’s a huge crime against humanity. Well said
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August 12th, 2019 at 8:19 pm
Truly. Thank you Sadje.
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August 12th, 2019 at 8:20 pm
You’re welcome 😊
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August 12th, 2019 at 8:42 pm
So moving, and regrettably true. The world cannot see the loss of it’s own soul. Great bit of deep and complex poetry.
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August 12th, 2019 at 10:26 pm
Thank you for your kind words JP. Some us see and we’re heartbroken.
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August 12th, 2019 at 9:50 pm
It’s heartbreaking when children are violated, especially so if that is because of the abuse of a people who was supposed to protect them. We’re hearing more such news all over the news. Maybe, more people are gathering the courage to speak up. Because, the alternative is painfully hard to believe. Makes you wonder where humanity is headed for!
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August 12th, 2019 at 10:23 pm
I too am hearing more and more people expressing outrage. There may be hope for humanity yet. ❤️
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August 14th, 2019 at 12:30 pm
Yes, we really have to cling on to every last ray of hope.
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August 13th, 2019 at 11:12 am
Beautifully put Kat, what sort of world can this happened in…… Oh! wait it is , in our world. Apparently Jesus said “suffer little children to come on to me.” I don’t think he meant the words “Suffer little children” to be used literally. 💜💜
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August 13th, 2019 at 7:30 pm
So true Willow. Even the word suffer is taken out of context by greedy, evil people! 😟
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August 13th, 2019 at 7:31 pm
Yes indeed it is 💜💜
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