i shall never grow weary of the greens
the blues and the golden hues
of summer in full bloom
nor tire of listening to songbirds
frogs, crickets and cicadas,
the rain pitapatting
~kat
Kimo poems are an Israeli version of haiku. Apparently, there was a need for more syllables in Hebrew. That said, most of the rules are still familiar:
• 3 lines.
• No rhymes.
• 10 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second, and 6 in the third.
Also, the kimo is focused on a single frozen image (kind of like a snapshot). So it’s uncommon to have any movement happening in kimo poems.
July 13th, 2019 at 12:35 pm
Nor shall I 😏💜
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July 13th, 2019 at 5:36 pm
❤️💜❤️
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July 13th, 2019 at 6:06 pm
💜💜💜
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July 13th, 2019 at 4:02 pm
Perfect for the season!
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July 13th, 2019 at 4:53 pm
Thank you Sadje! It would be perfect if it wasn’t so hot! 😊
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July 13th, 2019 at 4:54 pm
True.
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July 13th, 2019 at 5:04 pm
You need some of that pitterpattering to cool down a bit!
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July 13th, 2019 at 5:05 pm
Yes we do. It only rains enough to create steam and more humidity! 🤣
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July 14th, 2019 at 2:31 am
Lovely poem, Kat.
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July 14th, 2019 at 8:00 am
Thanks Rob😊
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