A Trio of Triolets
fractured
it’s really not for me to say
let’s just agree to disagree
but things will never be the same
it’s really not for me to say
my thoughts don’t matter anyway
i’ll miss how close we used to be
it’s really not for me to say
let’s just agree to disagree
9/11
I remember
it was morning
that September
I remember
molten embers,
people mourning
I remember
it was morning
about this weather…
it’s raining again
wetness everywhere
oh, when will it end
it’s raining again
weather’s not my friend
it frizzes my hair
it’s raining again
wetness everywhere
~kat
For today’s NaPoWriMo 2019 Prompt: write a poem that uses repetition, I decided to try my hand at the triolet. It is a challenging and fun format. I was able to come up with a trio of them. The triolet is only 8 lines long with a rhyme scheme of: ABaAabAB (the capital lines are repeated with the A line repeating on lines 1, 4, and 7 and the B line repeating on lines 2 and 8). The syllable count for each line should match.
April 26th, 2019 at 2:34 pm
Beautifully written poems
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April 26th, 2019 at 3:04 pm
Thank you Sadje. ❤️
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April 26th, 2019 at 7:41 pm
You’re welcome Kat.
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April 26th, 2019 at 5:10 pm
You’ve mastered it again mistress Kat.
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April 26th, 2019 at 7:26 pm
Thank you Maestro! 😉
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April 26th, 2019 at 7:23 pm
I love triolets! These were all wonderfully executed.
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April 26th, 2019 at 7:27 pm
Thank you Linda. They are addictive.
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April 26th, 2019 at 10:04 pm
All well-written, the first one resonates with me.
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April 26th, 2019 at 10:12 pm
Thanks Lisa. 🙂 I’ve been there.
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April 28th, 2019 at 12:51 pm
All three are great, the 9/11 one is very poignant 💜
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April 28th, 2019 at 6:24 pm
Thanks Willow!
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