For Jane Dougherty’s A Month with Yeats – Day Twenty-One Poetry Challenge. I have been indulging my inner warrior with these challenges, but lest you think I am a total bitch for the cause of justice, I do have a tender romantic side. I am a many faceted wonder, if I don’t say so myself. At any rate I have felt a bit guilty for subjecting you to my rants without softening it with a bit of fluff every now and again. So today, as yesterday, I give you two takes on today’s prompt verse from Yeats’, ‘The Ragged Wood’. Both are wrapped around the theme of propositions. Happy Tuesday!

‘…by water among the trees
The delicate-stepping stag and his lady sigh’ —W.B. Yeats
A Proposition
sunrise comes but once a day
rise with me before it breaks
I’ll make tea; we’ll have some cake
and watch the darkness slip away
I can share my dreams with you
my secrets, promise them to keep
dear, we have all night to sleep
but only dawn to see this view
I propose a kiss, perhaps a swoon
long before the busy, bustled hurry
leave it all to someone else’s worry
we could even linger until noon
~kat
And a proposition of a very different kind…in my favorite form…the Cleave (three poems in one. Read column 1 (which are actual quotes of a certain certain), then column 2, finally both columns together top to bottom)
He Said…She Said
I moved in on her / i couldn’t believe it
Very heavily…like a bitch / that son of a bitch
but I couldn’t get there / i was frozen
I’m automatically attracted to beautiful / he just kept coming
Like a magnet / that disgusting face
I don’t even wait / forcing his slimy lips on mine
You can do anything / with those tiny hands
Grab em by the pussy / everywhere…all over me
When you’re a star / no one would believe me though
they let you do it / i’m not rich, or a man
But nobody has more respect / so i just keep my distance
Such a nasty woman / i’ll keep this to myself
She’s certainly not hot / it’s so embarrassing
Why does she keep interrupting? / he could ruin me
There’s nothing I love more than women / it’s just the way things are
~kat




November 21st, 2017 at 3:19 pm
All hail, The Mistress of Cleave!
Stupendous Kat.
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November 21st, 2017 at 4:09 pm
Thank you Peter. Love those cleaves. 😊
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November 21st, 2017 at 4:21 pm
It shows!
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November 21st, 2017 at 4:13 pm
A difficult form to master, Kat and you do it with brio 🙂
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November 21st, 2017 at 4:26 pm
It helps me make sense of the voices in my head…no it doesn’t…does too…just kidding…she’s not! Haha. I am just kidding of course. 😉
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November 21st, 2017 at 4:32 pm
That way madness lies…
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November 21st, 2017 at 4:43 pm
😊
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November 21st, 2017 at 5:43 pm
Wonderful series! 😎😎😎🥀🥀🥀
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November 21st, 2017 at 7:42 pm
Thanks Dorna
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