‘He made the world to be a grassy road
Before her wandering feet.’ -W.B. Yeats
Through the Breach of Tar and Pebbles
iron spires wrapped in nettles
splintery oak and knobby pine
iron spires wrapped in nettles
facades eroding, lost to time
penetrating every crevice
splintery oak and knobby pine
tendrils snaking ‘round a trellis
ghosted spaces, gently greening
penetrating every crevice
vibrant once again and teeming
blooms emerge and bumbles fly
ghosted spaces, gently greening
traces of human touch, disguised
Gaia’s voice calls forth the living
blooms emerge and bumbles fly
bursting forth from clay forgiving
iron spires wrapped in nettles
Gaia’s voice calls forth the living
iron spires wrapped in nettles
~kat
A Terzanelle for Jane Dougherty’s A Month With Yeats -Day Twelve Poetry Challenge inspired by the verse above from Yeats’ poem, ‘The Rose of the World’.
November 12th, 2017 at 6:00 pm
wonderful!
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November 12th, 2017 at 7:30 pm
Thank you T.L. 😊
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November 12th, 2017 at 6:08 pm
Wow!
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November 12th, 2017 at 7:13 pm
😊❤️😊
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November 12th, 2017 at 7:05 pm
Beautiful the way those nettles weave through your poem.
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November 12th, 2017 at 7:12 pm
Thank you Brenda. I love the terzanelle’s haunting refrain. 😊
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November 12th, 2017 at 7:34 pm
Yes, the modern austerity doesn’t allow for the repetition our brains desire. I love the old forms.
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November 12th, 2017 at 8:51 pm
Love the idea of emerging hope.
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November 12th, 2017 at 9:39 pm
Yes! It is life.
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November 13th, 2017 at 4:40 am
You can’t beat a good refrain! I like this, don’t know the form so thanks for introducing it to me 🙂
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November 13th, 2017 at 5:55 am
I know…right?! I shadow Shadow Poetry regularly 😉
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November 13th, 2017 at 5:58 am
I ought to go back to searching through it.
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November 13th, 2017 at 9:41 am
😊
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November 13th, 2017 at 5:29 pm
Exquisitely Awesome as Always! 😎😎😎😎😎🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀
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November 14th, 2017 at 7:06 am
Thank you Dorna. ❤️
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